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Posted by NottoocoolJulie (Member # 1580) on :
 
I thought this might be fun. You can Haiku anything from movie titles, to music, to actors, etc. I'll start. Mine is super cheesy.

Jake Ryan
I waited for you
But gave up

[Big Grin]
 
Posted by paulshrimpton (Member # 1022) on :
 
Here's a few fairly pitiful efforts:

What is a brain cloud?
Should he see another doc,
or should he just jump?

Sweet sixteen today.
Is it worse that they forget,
or he ignores me?

Even for a sure thing,
New England to California
Is a long way to go.

I'm sure that the plots of other 80's movies will inspire you all more.
 
Posted by Sam Hain (Member # 1552) on :
 
The nerds of Adams
beat the football players; cool
Boogers belch kicked butt

Metal videos
My music likes were molded
Long live rock and roll
 
Posted by Sam Hain (Member # 1552) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by NottoocoolJulie:
I thought this might be fun. You can Haiku anything from movie titles, to music, to actors, etc. I'll start. Mine is super cheesy.

Jake Ryan
I waited for you
But gave up

[Big Grin]

Cool topic you started. But a haiku has a 5-7-5 syllable pattern. Good idea just the same [Smile]
 
Posted by NottoocoolJulie (Member # 1580) on :
 
I know [Roll Eyes] ..I came up with the idea then had a total brain fart and couldn't come up with anything!!
DOH!!
 
Posted by paulshrimpton (Member # 1022) on :
 
Couple of mine missed out too - but apparently (and I looked it up!) us english-speakers are allowed a small variation on the 5-7-5 because it's more difficult to fit into our language (so says a japanese poet!)
 


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