Those that have been here a while will recall that writing some fanfic was something I was looking to get into a while back.
Well......
The first few chapters of my first effort (based on The Breakfast Club) are now online. I'm getting feedback there, and most of it seems to be pretty positive. So I wanted to get some critiques and comments from you lot as well.
Please go take a look - and let me know what you think, either by posting comments there or here.
Nine chapters are up so far (not all very long chapters!) and as I post more, I'll update this thread.
Thanks - and be kind!!
Paul
Posted by NowhereGirl (Member # 465) on :
good job paul! i was only able to read the monday morning submission, is that all that's available through your link? anyway, that was really really good. Posted by P.S. It's Paul.... (Member # 1022) on :
Yeah - the 9 (current) chapters there as of now is all I've done so far. I know where the story is going, but not got it down on paper yet.
Posted by jdocster04 (Member # 5752) on :
Paul,
That's pretty interesting stuff... You definately have a knack for writing. Perhaps you should enter some kind of contest.
Keep going... Posted by The Mouse Avenger (Member # 4406) on :
Very good so far. Posted by Earth Angel (Member # 3301) on :
That is excellent Paul....I really enjoyed that. I want to know whathappened next now Posted by Paul Dangerously, you iceholes.... (Member # 1022) on :
OK - two things.... first of all
BUMP!
Second of all, wanted to get some feedback on my latest two 80s fanfic stories, which I have posted today....
First one, which whilst there is no actual sex or bad language deals with a different kind of romantic moment (so if you are very easily offended, don't say you haven't been warned) is of course based on some Kind Of Wonderful:
The second is a bit of fun based on the Steve Martin movie Dead Men Don't Wear Plaid, and deals with the only one of his previous cases that he mentions in the script....:
Those of you that are familiar with LiveJournal, you'll know that there's a default click-through to state you are over 14, based on some content on other pages or in other stories. Both of mine are fine though.
Please leave me some feedback here?
Thx guys
Paul
Posted by Kash (Member # 297) on :
Haven't read these yet Paul, but I remember those excellent Breakfast Club stories you wrote. Most fan fiction is a bit ropey at the best of times IMO, but the scenarios you imagined could actually have formed the basis of a legitimate sequel.
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