I've noted several aspiring writers on here have posted the links to their tales concerning our favorite quintet over the years. Allow me to now do the same with my own story "First Prize," which I completed last night. It is mainly Brian-centric (in many ways, I AM Brian, so it makes sense to make him the central figure), but the others get their fair share of story time as well. The address for all who may be interested is:
Very good. The simplicity in your writing but at the same time being slightly under and slightly over descriptive in different parts keeps it just that - simple and easy to read. I hope you dont take offense to my opinion and remember its just that. However, im now keen to read more, well done and keep this going.
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